盼－－西女古意

沅湘

七年听子规，
2 o7 e" @9 `* A5 j9 k* ^默默拭泪处；
八载望眼穿，
- H. p: X9 k1 X9 L魂与斜阳遇。
麦穗腾浪连天波，
巧手挥镰快如梭。
1 p6 z1 L& J, z' u五月麦场掀流金，
. Z- u3 _5 J8 K$ Y轻衣舞动窈窕身；
. ^! e: o( Z! N3 J迎风扬秕播彩云，
播出一曲白头吟。
7 k$ I2 G. b( Z苦也乐，
- A! I, ^7 S: o8 B4 [% x; P愁也乐，
& R1 f; [* @  h, a6 F愁云苦雨伴长歌。
乐也误，
$ @# `: R4 `0 L4 H3 w; g& A喜也误，
$ ]8 g/ C6 `3 W. J人去家乡无限路。
& L$ S7 j- W. v1 N, o; k% J虽然墨香侵红袖，
也能麦穗作流苏。
0 ~' r, {0 o5 c) q家国两地夏日长，
且抛麦粒挽夕阳；
日下亲人若相望，
化雨千行复万行。
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自注：此诗从西女Lucy 割麦的传说中化出。

无墨

哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
. S: D& M+ k! M4 Q不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回忆~~~~

沅湘

Originally posted by 无墨 at 2006-6-15 12:58 PM:
哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
3 s6 X' p  b6 r$ w: t" z5 P当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
4 n) y5 p# ^# I3 w' e跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
, m  m" {$ J$ o$ x' U3 c不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回 ...

我的这个西女是Lucy （露西，西方文化中一个很有名气的才女）转过来的，你一定也知道，故意说是西安的女子吧。等着看你的关于西安女子的文章。

新竹

Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-15 11:57 PM:
Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

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Haven\'t seen you on line for a while. I guess you are very busy. Take care of your pretty voice, please.

There are many Lucy girls in English literature. I had both Wordsworth\'s and E. Browning\'s in mind.

新竹

There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.

Of all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
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I am already burnt out (like aways). I would like to watch the World Cup too, but the TV is broken. You take care too.

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-26 02:34 PM:
There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.

Of all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
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There you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

oy98oy

顶才子!

林子丹

Originally posted by 沅湘 at 2006-6-27 01:59 AM:
5 P; ]' s6 W5 |, X! mThere you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

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( C% l3 |' a9 l1 pThe Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.

7 a7 ]5 }+ K5 gNevertheless, this poem is good. ))

沅湘

Originally posted by 林子丹 at 2006-6-28 08:32 PM:
/ W- f& f3 |1 t' fThe Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.

Nevertheless, this poem is good. ))