盼－－西女古意

沅湘

七年听子规，
默默拭泪处；
: ]( I% B; X3 |% N6 y- _2 O八载望眼穿，
) Z# |0 }7 L$ C魂与斜阳遇。
% j( ~! R& \2 a+ {; l麦穗腾浪连天波，
6 E! t9 F9 ~0 D$ m5 e巧手挥镰快如梭。
五月麦场掀流金，
  L2 Q+ }+ {) U: Q% H2 I9 G6 I轻衣舞动窈窕身；
迎风扬秕播彩云，
播出一曲白头吟。
苦也乐，
" t6 l2 C# c: `! i愁也乐，
9 X; F2 W) U* H$ X+ x! B. ^愁云苦雨伴长歌。
4 V8 _: X! H( t9 z4 t; V& `乐也误，
喜也误，
人去家乡无限路。
1 w: c. E% ?2 Y" {* j虽然墨香侵红袖，
也能麦穗作流苏。
家国两地夏日长，
且抛麦粒挽夕阳；
/ L. d: l* s$ ]) x0 @# n: x$ v日下亲人若相望，
化雨千行复万行。

0 E+ {% b+ V* p自注：此诗从西女Lucy 割麦的传说中化出。

无墨

哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
5 K3 E* m1 J+ B1 r不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回忆~~~~

沅湘

Originally posted by 无墨 at 2006-6-15 12:58 PM:
( a1 s# h; Y3 q哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
% q0 t5 g3 o% d0 o6 Y! ~9 m% I  W当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
/ v; H1 v) K! Z2 m2 U不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回 ...

" |8 t  z4 T, L) t& @* @我的这个西女是Lucy （露西，西方文化中一个很有名气的才女）转过来的，你一定也知道，故意说是西安的女子吧。等着看你的关于西安女子的文章。

新竹

Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-15 11:57 PM:
2 X3 e3 X3 B: e) I1 N7 u- L8 nWho is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

! e/ J4 N* L! O- ^Haven\'t seen you on line for a while. I guess you are very busy. Take care of your pretty voice, please.
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There are many Lucy girls in English literature. I had both Wordsworth\'s and E. Browning\'s in mind.

新竹

There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.

5 N3 {- G0 W9 G! j4 SOf all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.

" I1 A+ l$ ^. _I am already burnt out (like aways). I would like to watch the World Cup too, but the TV is broken. You take care too.

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-26 02:34 PM:
( o) L3 O2 M  E# u% uThere is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.
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Of all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
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: Y# f$ h: o' ^# p+ xThere you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

oy98oy

顶才子!

林子丹

Originally posted by 沅湘 at 2006-6-27 01:59 AM:
There you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

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The Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.
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Nevertheless, this poem is good. ))

沅湘

Originally posted by 林子丹 at 2006-6-28 08:32 PM:
The Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.

8 X1 ]; d& L/ VNevertheless, this poem is good. ))